Peer assessment of flat plans and idea's

Peer Feedback

• Re-think house style because of so many clashing colours, may turn into a put off. Only include two colours that clash to create a unique selling point to draw in my target audience.
• Work on layout of double page spread because it looks boring on my flat plans. It needs to look interesting to match my target audience which ties in with the mark scheme because it says that the magazine needs to appeal to the target audience.
• Re-draft front cover because the image is too far to the left and all the writing is on the right therefore it looks less professional than if i was to move the image to the middle. I also need to evaluate the font size of each sell line to make the importance of each one obvious. 

Improvements I'm going to make

• Originally i used clashing colours such as orange/blue, red/green and yellow/purple. Due to the feedback i was given about them i have decided to use colours that don't clash but do appear striking to the reader such as black/red or blue/white.
• On my double page layout I have decided to move one of the images into the main article column and put the other two images on an angle to create a fresh and exciting appeal to the readers.
• By strategically placing the image in the middle and surrounding it in sell lines (including the main one), the level of professionalism will improve which relates to the mark scheme because it states the magazine needs to look like it was created to a professional level.